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To a Saintly Rose

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Once again, this is for a friend of mine or her birthday. :D August 22nd, 2008. :D I am actually REALLY happy with how this truned out. It all rhymesAND it has a syllable pattern:

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YAAAAHHHH!!!! :w00t!:



To a Saintly Rose


Though all the Saints are dead and gone,
Gone by the Pearly Stair,
I might tell God, He’d left one here
But I don’t like to share.
Because in this vast garden, full
Of bright pink, rosy buds
There’s a pretty one in reddest bloom
As red as Christ’s own blood.

Her flower petals soft and fair
Upon a slender shoot,
Her very saintly life, a prayer
As solid as her root.
Though only sixteen years of age
The Book of Life’s not through
And every action turns a page
By God’s grace and His dew.

Though I’m among the ugly thorns
That blister on the bough,
And you, the Queen’s own head adorns
And I adorn Christ’s brow.
May we always, like rose and thorn
Twining and befriending,
Until the days we’ll be reborn
And Heaven, too, ascending.
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cave-fatuam22's avatar
Wow. I was sure for a second there that you knew my sister.. her name's Rose and her birthday's the same as your friend. The only thing to convince me otherwise is that she isn't 16. Very nice poem (: